Sample graded paper (excerpt)
 
Bill Smith

English 101.0X

Professor John Doe

October 31, 2003

WHY THE NINE TO FIVE? SSTF
                                         GR#7                                                                  N9
               I hate my alarm clock, sometimes I want to kill it.  At 6:00 every weekday mourning
                    45a                                                                              18d
my $19.95 panasonic alarm clock either pierces into my much needed beauty time with obnoxiously 
                                                                                                              WP
shrill beeping or blares out irritatingly “peppy” disc jockeys laughing way to hard at their own 16c wordy
                                    45a
bad jokes.  Before I had the panasonic, I had a nifty GE stereo model with dual alarms and battery
           GR#2GR#1             N10                                                        N5
backup.  You don't often find a closk as good as that old GE.  It was "the bomb".  Unfortunately, 
                                                                                                                 32a           32b
one morning I threw it through my bedroom window.  I killed that clock and honestly I felt pretty 

good going outside and smashing it into tiny bits with an iron pipe.  I suspect that I am not alone in
                                                                                       N10/38a
my passionate hatred of alarm clocks of all makes and model

Sample worksheet:
 

Name_Bill Smith____________  Assignment:__Paper 2____________

Major errors
GR3
GR5
GR6-7
Bedford 21
Bedford 27
Graded draft  GR3, GR3ip  GR5 GR7, GR7fc
GR7q
 21a  
Corrected draft          

Other golden rules problems
GR1
GR2
GR4
GR8
GR9
GR10
Graded draft GR1, GR1
GR1
 GR2, GR2  GR4, GR4    GR9  
Corrected draft            

Nuggets problems
N1
N2
N3
N4
N5
N6
N7
N8
N9/N10
Graded draft    N2, N2 N3
N3cr
N3cr
         N8:IIII  
Corrected draft                  

Quotes and documentation problems; "simple stuff" problems; "word problems"
QD1
QD2
QD3
QD4
QD5
SS
WP
Graded draft    QD2: III       SSTF, SSH
SSH
 WP: III
Corrected draft              

Bedford errors
1-15
16-18
19-28
29-45
46-64
Graded draft  4a
 6b,6b
 7e,7e
 18c,18c, 18d
 17f
 23a,23a,23b,23e
 26d, 28b
 44a,
 32a,32b,32c, 32a
 45b
 39b
 
Corrected draft