Peer response 3

As with the first two responses, the key is that you be as tactfully critical as you can so that you will help your classmate improve his or her paper.

Your comments and suggestions are not limited to the items below, and of course, while you should mark on your classmate's draft, the majority of your response should be on separate paper.  Read the paper through once completely, then concentrate on these important areas:

Most importantly, be meanin the nicest possible way, of course.